Thursday, 3 January 2013

Blurb- Draft

Sam thinks he's normal. Completely and utterly normal. Until the FBI kicks down his door.
Now he's running, and he's finding the answers to questions that would be better unknown.
Who is Sam? Why is he being hunted?
And what defines a human being?

5 comments:

  1. HE'S SIDING WOTH THE TRANSFORMERS! :O

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  2. The use of the word "but" is incorrect, and you may want to rework that sentence entirely - it doesn't seem to flow to well.

    Are those questions the ones that shouldn't be answered? If they are, I don't think you should list them in the blurb. You've just thrown away half your story that could have been the search for these questions.
    If they are not the questions that's mentioned just before, then they seem a little out of place. "Who is Sam?" will be answered by the book, right? If he's the protagonist you probably don't want the book to begin with a question like that when you're probably going to answer it right away.

    wow. That was meant to be a single sentence, sorry. D:

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  3. SAM IS A CREEPER :0 TSSSSS.....

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