Life is cruel. Don’t let anyone tell you any different. Life is cruel, life never gives, it only takes. Life will kick you when you’re down, life will make sure that by the end, you’re begging for death. Life will only take.
And it took everything from me.
This is where it used to be. I'm taking down anything I might consider getting published.
Ah, so...ah.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing. The whole thing seems a lot more...something rather than the other now.
great story.
ReplyDeleteum... great story. i like it.
Great.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing it.
Brilliant! I loved it! More!!
ReplyDeleteDramatic beginning:)
ReplyDeleteKEEP WRITING! Like everybody else's said, IT WAS A GREAT STORY!
Nix i agree with everyone else, keep writing it!
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