The man walked through the corridors of the German Sanctuary.
His hands were clasped behind his back, and he walked and a slow pace. His
black three-piece suit with a velvet red tie was expensive, and his light brown
hair straight and tidy, combed back. He wasn’t too tall or short, too narrow or
wide, but he was good looking. He managed to draw attention to himself with
every movement, precise and careful. Every step he took, every time he shifted
his shoulders or moved his hands, it all had a look of formality about it. A
careful elegance.
The man had a small smile on his face. He was being lead
through the Sanctuary by the Administrator. He was an important person, not
just to the German’s, but to Sanctuaries worldwide. His dark brown eyes scanned
everything around him. His footsteps
were soft. The man’s name was Charles Decorous.
“Mr. Decorous,” a voice said, and Charles eyes found the
source. The Grande Mage of the German Sanctuary, Dirich Whrait.
“Grand Mage,” Charles said, and gave a
small bow of his head. Although he didn’t work in Germany, it was always important
to be polite. You never know when any old person could one day be extremely
helpful.
“I’m glad you did well,” Whrait said,
trying to keep his face expressionless, but unable to stop the relief present
on his features.
Charles raised an eyebrow but said
nothing. Did well didn’t exactly
describe how difficult Charles’ job was, and how he had managed to succeed
against all odds.
None of the other Elders were present,
because Whrait didn’t want them to know that he had employed Charles to find
something that was never meant to be missing in the first place.
“May I see it?” The Grand Mage asked, and
held out his hand. Charles reluctantly handed it over. He wasn’t certain what
the artifact was, but he had spent his whole life perfecting his knowledge of
them, and could sense the power coming off it. If he had known beforehand that
it was this powerful, he wouldn’t allow Whrait to employ his skills, and would
simply find it himself. More likely than not he would destroy it.
The Grand Mage held it up to the light, as
if trying to determine if it was genuine. He looked back at Charles. “Thank
you, Mr. Decorous. I have your fee ready.”
“If you don’t mind, Grand Mage, I would
like to study it for a while,” Charles said, motioning his head at the artifact
still in Whrait’s hand. “It is a hobby of mine, and this is very intriguing to
me.”
Whrait plastered a polite smile on his
face that failed to look real. “This artifact is the heart of Germany, Mr.
Decorous,” he said. “It’s been missing for a long time. It disappeared during a
war.”
Charles tilted his head slightly. To a
regular person, that sentence would probably mean nothing. But Charles spent
his whole life assessing everything around him.
A war. Not the war. The war with Mevolent
was called The War by everyone. There had been very few magical wars previous
to that, and besides, from the rumours Charles had heard, the artifact had been
seen early in the war.
There had been no magical wars since, so the logical assumption
was that it had been a mortal war. And although regular sorcerers could fight
in any war they please, the Sanctuaries all agreed that it would be forbidden
for any of them to get involved in any mortal war. They couldn’t risk their
actions fuelling another magical war.
Charles allowed himself a small smile, although he lowered his
head so Whrait wouldn’t see it. Did he just find evidence that the German
Sanctuary could have been involved in a mortal war?
Leverage, if he would ever need it.
He looked up again. “Very
well, Grand Mage. If there’s nothing else, I’ll just collect my fee and depart
back for Ireland. It’s been a long time since I’ve been home.”
The Grand Mage nodded, and handed Charles an envelope. He
didn’t bother checking its contents; he simply pocketed it and walked off.
As he exited the Sanctuary, his phone rang. He frowned at the
caller ID, and answered the call.
“I didn’t think I would hear from you in a while, Agis.”
There was a silence on the other end for what seemed like ages.
Then suddenly, a man sighed. “I figured it out Charles.”
Charles got into a taxi that looked more like a Mercedes. “What
did you figure out Agis?” he asked distractedly.
“It, Charles. The puzzle. In Switzerland. I figured it out
Charles. I finally did it.”
Charles eyes widened as he remembered. He sat there for a
moment, thoughts racing through his head. Then he grinned. “That’s great Agis!”
he said enthusiastically.
Agis was silent for a little while longer. “Charles… I had to
tell them.”
Charles mood suddenly dropped. “Tell who?”
“They came for me. There wasn’t anything I could do.”
“Who did you tell?”
Charles let his temper get away from him.
“It… doesn’t matter who. All you need to know is that news is
going to spread like mad Charles, but only to the right people.”
Charles didn’t say anything.
Agis suddenly sounded as if he were crying. “I didn’t want to…
but…”
“Where are you?” Charles asked. “I’ll come get you.”
“No!” Agis’ voice was suddenly sharp. “Go to Ireland, and wait
until you hear word from me.”
Charles voice turned soft. “Agis-”
“Promise me, Charles. I need you to wait, just a few weeks at
most.”
Charles knew that he needed to be quick, to have a good chance.
But he also knew that sometimes waiting a little while longer for a little more
information could very well be the difference between success and failure.
“Alright, my friend.”
Agis didn’t say anything else, he just hung up. Charles put his
phone away, troubled, but also excited. The hunt was on. He was a little
disappointed he would have to wait. But
it didn’t matter. He would need that time to set up a good team.
Charles leaned back in his chair, and smiled. Yes, the hunt was
definitely on.
What I said in the email.
ReplyDeleteHoly crap, it's awesome, literally can't wait for more.
Write.
Oooooooh.
ReplyDeleteIt's awesome!!!!
Can't wait for more!!!!!!
The Glorious Hunt? The Adventures of Decorous? Charlie and The Hunt?
ReplyDelete:P Might need to know a bit more about the story before we can come up with names...
But this looks insanely good! Write some more! Soon!
The head tilt means something, yet you phased away from it so quickly without explanation.
ReplyDeleteA little wordy and jumpy in the bit about the wars, but nicely put together. Maybe you should paragraph less.
It gets a little jumpy at the end there, from about halfway down to the end. It also kind of falls apart at the same time. The start was really good, but it just sorta flops...
Charles is very interesting. He seems mysterious at the start, and rather cool and smooth, then that fizzles away as the story progresses. I think you should change the way Charles walks, or completely change his character. The way in which someone walks deeply reflects who they and how they are feeling.
But good story. You've got some good skills at making suspense.
As for titles, I am no help. D:
This is great. Based on what we know now I have made a few titles...
ReplyDeleteThe Puzzling Puzzle
The Mortal War
Involvement
Obscure Involvement
Cim
Sognon
Arast Whidohaty
Thrust is Awesome
Fovero
Parse
titlar överskattade
I'm not sure what you think of me and my naming-stuff skills, but if you don't use any of those titles, maybe I may have to...