The man scratched something on the piece of parchment in
front of him. The lone candle cast a flickering light. The man, his brown hair
long and shaggy, had his head dipped over his parchment. He was writing
furiously, with the dedication only the truly desperate can muster. He was a
man who was on the brink of discovery, on knowing it all. He was also on the
brink of losing it all.
He was so absorbed in his writing that he didn’t notice the
boy at his door, watching him. But after almost a full minute, the boy started
coughing painfully. The man raised his head. He was slender, with a thin face
and sharp features. His eyes were a plain brown. He had to beard, but several
days’ worth of an unkempt, unshaven face.
The man immediately rose from his seat and walked to the
boy. The boy was weak and pale. His bright green eyes were full of pain. His
light brown hair was immensely similar to the man’s, brown and shaggy. His
small body was trembling. He was dying.
“Daniel,” the man said, bending down and picking the boy up
in his arms. “What are you doing up?”
The boy took a moment to get his breath. “I couldn’t sleep
father,” he said, his voice hoarse. “Can I please drink something?”
The boy’s father, for this was who he was, brushed the boy’s
hair out of his eyes and spoke softly. “I will bring something up to you, shall
I? But you must try and sleep Daniel. The doctor will be here tomorrow morn.”
Daniel nodded. His father carried him up the stairs and into
his bed, where he tucked him in and kissed him on the forehead. “Try to rest
Daniel. I’ll bring you some water when you wake.”
Daniel nodded drowsily. “Goodnight father,” he said, his
eyes drooping.
“Goodnight, my son. You will be fine, I promise you,” the
boy’s father said. But Daniel was already asleep.
The man walked back down the stairs and into his study. He
didn’t know what was wrong with his son, but he did know the root of it. He
couldn’t let his son die. His son was his whole world.
No matter the cost, he would save his son.
Seems promising! I wanna read more, like, NOW!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! I want to read more too!
ReplyDeleteSounds good. Definitely need to read more of this.
ReplyDeleteSounds good.
ReplyDeleteOminous! Or is it onimous? No, it's ominous. Ever since I read Charlie Bone, which has a character called Mr Onimous, I've been getting confused . . .
ReplyDeleteNOT MORE COUGHING!!
Yay. This is like Mr Gold (aka Rumplestiltskin) and his son Once Upon A Time. He becomes the Dark One and gets all this evil power so he can protect his son with it. Then he, obviously, ends up driving his son away and never seeing him again. Idiot. :P
*son in Once Upon A Time
ReplyDeleteGah, being on a laptop was meant to SOLVE the typos . . .
*wipes years away* What a father wouldn't do for his son... I'm sorry, I can't go on . *turns away to cry*
ReplyDeleteHaha, nah, it's great xD
Less talking, Nix. More writing.
ReplyDelete... What do you think this is?
DeleteLooking good. Keep at it.
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