Well, you three people who commented said that you'd like your own Tenacious story
I tried...
But it ended up as the same setting Heroes of a Super Variety is going to be, and I found that Tenacious ened up working in the background, which is what he does, but I wanted to show him working in the background
It always hurts to scrap an idea.
So either back to the drawing board, which is currently being stubbornly blank, or the fanfic. This is not to ask your opinion, I'm simply keeping you updated
Peace out
Monday, 19 November 2012
Monday, 12 November 2012
Tenacious
One of the best characters I've made, in my opinion. Now I need your opinion on a matter
Should I continue to write Tenacious as a SP fan-fic, with Skul and Val appearing quite often, and other characters I've made that I like appearing (none you've seen, I think) or should I make it it's own story?
I could make it's own story. Personally, I think it could be better as a fan-fic, but not being completely sure I'd like to hear your tale on the situation. If you give a few reasons for your opinion also, that would be great.
PEACE OUT
Should I continue to write Tenacious as a SP fan-fic, with Skul and Val appearing quite often, and other characters I've made that I like appearing (none you've seen, I think) or should I make it it's own story?
I could make it's own story. Personally, I think it could be better as a fan-fic, but not being completely sure I'd like to hear your tale on the situation. If you give a few reasons for your opinion also, that would be great.
PEACE OUT
Tuesday, 6 November 2012
A Strange Killer: Chapter 3 - Partners and Anger
Not exactly what I wanted for this chapter, but maybe it worked. Either way, the next chapter should be better
Partners were one of those
things that came in all shapes and sizes. They could be weak, by the book. Or a
tough, stupid in your face kind of person. A control freak. A risky idiot.
An insane, angry murderer.
Zathract sighed. He had
already broken something, which had come in the form of a criminal’s face. So
he wasn’t angry anymore. Just… annoyed. He did not need a partner, any more
than he wanted one.
He thought about the
closest thing he had to a partner recently. Ah, there was the anger again.
Nixion Strange.
Zathract had saved his
life, and together they had saved not only Australia, but the world. True,
maybe Nix had repaid the debt, but if Zathract had saved his life just as many
times and Nix had saved his, did that make them even? Was that the only reason
Nix had stayed all those years? Because he felt he owed Zathract?
No, that wasn’t it. There
must have been times when they were even, maybe Nix even saved him more than
Zathract had once or twice before he left. No, something else must have
changed…
He sighed. His thoughts were mixed, jumbled,
hardly making any sense. He had put off going to the Sanctuary for too long
now. He strode out the door and got on his motorbike. He remembered once it had
crashed and Nix and fixed it. Good as new, though Nix had scowled like it was a
horrible inconvenience.
As he rode, he struggled
against the tide of memories threatening to wash him away. This was not the
time for reminiscing.
The Sanctuary, as per
usual the last few weeks, was busy. Everything looked like a mess, with offices
having paper all over the floor, sorcerers running from door to door, and the
general feel of panic in the air.
Zathract walked down the
corridors, looking calm and collected compared to his fellow workers. There
were times when Zathract wished he wasn’t so Sanctuary based. Of course, he
used to do his own thing a lot more. But things change, and more to the point,
people change.
Zathract and Nix were
perfect examples of that.
“Detective Mist,” the
Grand Mage said and Zathract walked into the chamber. None of the other elders
were there. Only Zathract, the Grand Mage, and a boy that was probably the temp
partner. Zathract gave him a quick glance.
He couldn’t be older than
seventeen, but possibly younger. He had dirty blonde hair, and his skin was
tanned. His grin was cocky, and his eyes a piercing green. Like Zathract’s had
been. He wore fairly simple clothes, regular blue jeans and a green T-shirt
under a black coat. His cowboy style boots were scuffed. He had a lollypop in
his mouth.
“Grand Mage,” Zathract
said, looking away from the boy. “How are things?”
“Same as yesterday,” the
Grand Mage said, raising an eyebrow. He grabbed his pen and started writing.
After a few awkward seconds, he gestured to the boy without looking up.
“This is your partner for this
case, Jamie Vaunting.”
Jamie took a step forward,
his hand outstretched. “Nice ta meet ya.”
Zathract looked at him
from a second before shaking the hand. He couldn’t quite place the accent. It
sounded faintly African, although the boy was white.
“I trust that the two of
you can co-operate for this case. I’ve heard good things from you Vaunting.”
The Grand Mage still didn’t look up from his writing.
The boy grinned. “I’m
guessin’ right alongside with the bad ones.”
Zathract turned around and
walked out. Jamie quickly followed him, not letting the sudden exit take him by
surprise. Zathract walked into his office, and sat down. Vaunting sat down in
the other, putting his feet up on the desk.
“So, what’s this case
about then?”
Zathract looked at him
until the feet were off the desk. “Nixion Strange has been behind the murder of
seven Sanctuary agents, and we need to track him down.”
Vaunting raised an
eyebrow. “Do I get to kill ‘im?”
“You couldn’t if you
tried.” Zathract leaned back in his chair, looking at the boy. “How old are
you?”
The cocky grin was back.
“Seventeen in a few months.”
“So sixteen then,”
Zathract said. Normally, when he met new agents, he would get a file on them.
He knew absolutely nothing about this boy. “Where are you from?”
“Zimbabwe originally. But
I go all over Africa.” The boy put his hands behind his head. “I occasionally
help the Sanctuary. My father worked there. But I mostly do my own thing.”
“Anything else I should
know?”
“Yeah, but you’ll learn it
over time.” Vaunting grinned and took the lollypop out of his mouth.
Zathract stood. This was
not going to end well.
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